Thread: Ode To A Road
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Old 09-01-2008, 06:29 AM   #9
Sundae
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I really liked it Dana.
I like the way the long vowels predominate, giving the stretch and the wait of the traffic.

That's the only minor criticism I'd have; you're not addressing the road - it's not the road's fault, it's the people's! Blame the commuters. Although I understand the appeal of the title.

And yes. Photos of Hebden Bridge please. I'm as fascinated as the Merkins about this Lesbos in the North. Especially the unusually large gays.
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