Yes, there's the trouble -- horny adolescents who haven't gotten any, trying to write what they don't know, and can't spell any too well either.
Something like Fabulae was considerably better, but their site is down, and even their offerings had a certain strain to the tone -- comes of trying to get the cute hero and heroine to perform acts out of character to accord with the writer's idea of what's a turn-on. Kinky pictures of Harry & Co. seem a lot more successful on their artistic merits -- when they have any. Sturgeon's Law...
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Wanna stop school shootings? End Gun-Free Zones, of course.
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