Well, you have to admit it does get pretty gibberish-y at times:
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Best Artworks of Chinese CG Artists, as far as I can see, leaves no doubt about its quality and the desirable attributes of standing by itself. Although various absurdities abound in the commercial illustration sector in China today, the painting lovers themselves have clean fantasies, whose commitment touched me so deeply that I had to set aside my prepared remarks against those prevalent malpractices.
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The phrasing is still clearly foreign. The ideas are there, and the vocabulary is mostly correct, but it's just not English phrasing at all. Something like this is what you are looking for:
The first book, "CG Artwork from China," stands alone as a collection of the greatest works available from that culture today. Though the commercial sector is full of questionable work, some of it nothing more than absurd pornography, true art lovers have more pure visions. The artists collected here are so committed to the dignity of their subjects, that I was forced to set aside my prepared remarks condemning the state of the industry today. Their work is truly moving.
But it's a long piece, and pretty much every paragraph needs adjusting like this. You're going to have a hard time finding someone who will re-write the whole thing for you unless you're willing to pay them.