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Brianna!
Needius Worse Than Ever is proper poetry imho
And bear in mind my humble opinionated self reads a lot of it
It reminds me so much of U A Fanthorpe, who herself worked as a nurse on a psychiatric ward (I'll check that - I know she worked with mental patients)
You have a beautiful turn of phrase and some outstanding imagery
Just ETA because I've realised it might not be yours!
If it is, you amaze me.
You do anyway
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Last edited by Sundae; 04-19-2008 at 08:05 PM.
Reason: May not be Brianna's poem
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