I like the poem as well. Keep up the good work. I wonder how many of us poets have wrote poems about poetry.com. I know I've wrote one, looks like you wrote this one with poetry.com in mind.
*and the wheels begin to turn*
Watch out for smoke I've got my mind going again. I've been thinking about starting a site for us poets. Not knowing how to get enough poets to the site is the only reason I haven't. That and just like everyone here we as poets like to know what we're getting into before we jump. Once burnt, twice shy. If I decide I'm going to get this idea going I'll let everyone know.
Anyone who would like to take a look at some of my work I have a few months worth on my site. Feel free to look
www.e53.org/lucky http://www.e53.org/lucky