I think your English has gotten much better since you've been here. I thought I'd try to help you out on a few things. I hope you don't take offense. I'm not that good at grammar myself, but I do know a little. I'm not going to cover everything, because for the most part we understand you just fine. But perhaps a few corrections might help you improve.
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Originally posted by Billy
Of course, some companies really product the pollution.
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'Product' is a noun. But here, you're using it as a verb. The word you're looking for is 'produce'.
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Originally posted by Billy
Ago we hoped that company invested to improve indsutry progress.
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'Ago' is not commonly used in this fashion. I don't know if it's grammatically correct or not, but it sounds wrong. Something like "Many years ago," or "long ago," would probably be better. Also, I think that you're talking about multiple companies in this sentence. If that's true, then the word 'company' should be plural. And instead of 'invested', it should be 'would invest'. So, an alternate sentence might read:
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<b>"Long ago, we hoped that companies would invest to improve industry progress".</b>
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Originally posted by Billy
We ignored the pollution. There are no pure water to drink in some palces so that they go to other places to live.
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'Water' in this sentence is singular. So, instead of saying 'are', you should say 'is'. There should be a comma after 'places'. And also, you don't specify who 'they' is . Who is 'they'? Pronouns have to refer to something. In this case, you could use a noun instead, like 'people'. Also, I think the word 'that' is unneccesary. So, you could instead say:
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<b>Now, there is no pure water to drink in some places, so people go to other places to live. </b>
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I think the rest of your message is perfectly understandable. Hope this helps. :)