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My poem is very spontaneous.
Not going to any great pains, I'm just
Writing a few lines down here in the dust.
Now you can criticize this if you must.
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This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality
Embrace this moment, remember
We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan
Last edited by lumberjim; 10-27-2007 at 02:09 PM.
Reason: added some syllables.....also, i notice that the edit window is longer again. its 3:09 now
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