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Old 11-15-2006, 02:11 PM   #4
Sundae
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From The Bridge by Iain Banks

A(bridge)D

"Just you shut the fuk up"
But the rok comes rollin
She is sitting sideways on a seat
The Field Marshall's quarters; an old study

Climb the highest dune
See this fox hole?
Study drawing and painting
For longer than I care to think about

Holding a black hat in one hand
He bought a Toyota MR2
Scattering people to either side
Not a boat, the rocking's damped

"Aw wait a fukin minnit!"
I am lying on the ground
an it sits on ma showdder
Exploded through the great pipes

"I would like to see Dr Joyce"
Some complicated mechanism
He did tell Andrea
Sticking my head through the broken pane

Perhaps not an ideal choice of book, as there are sections written in dialect as well as fantasy/ dream sequences. But it was that or random phrases from the Royal Pharmaceutical Society's Guidance on Child Protection, which I am ostensibly working on tonight!

I didn't add any grammar - it stands or falls exactly as written in the book.
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