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In a job description on Monster.com:
Our company is a based in Wilmington, Delaware, a vibrant, growing city located midway between New York and Washington and just two hours from the shores of the Atlantic Ocean.
The only words I've changed are the first two.
1--I'm sorry, I must be confused...that, or those folks are smoking some great weed and not sharing. As a whole, from what I've seen, Wilmington is a toilet.
2--Poor sentence construction. We're all guilty of it at times, but come on! This is an advertisement of your company...would you be willing to hire me as an editor/proofreader?
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