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DanaC · 06-14-2006, 05:26 PM

Thanks for the feedback guys! Most useful and appreciated. I think losing the repetition of 'I' in the last verse in particular, makes it scan a lot better.

06-14-2006, 05:26 PM	#7
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	Thanks for the feedback guys! Most useful and appreciated. I think losing the repetition of 'I' in the last verse in particular, makes it scan a lot better.