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04-20-2006, 11:53 AM

As it just so happens, I am trying to drum up some work online writing resumes for people, so I gave yours a quick try. You need to have a clearly stated employment goal at the top of your resume. I don't know what job you are applying for, so I just put in "Engineering Director." You can fill in whatever the actual job title is that you are hoping to get.

Generally, jobs are listed in reverse chronological order, and the use of the first person "I" is avoided. Its also important to list whatever achievements you accomplished at each of your jobs. I wasn't sure about your position(s) at your first place of employment, but it sounds as though they promoted you, so put that in.

Usually salary is negotiated when the job offer is made, so don't put down a desired salary on your resume.

Use "action" words like "implemented," "coordinated," "supervised."

Let me know if you find this revision useful and good luck!

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Objective: Engineering Director

Summary: Three years’ experience with a Fortune 500 company.
Aggressive, independent and able to work under pressure in a dynamic environment. Excellent teamwork and coordination skills. Proficient at learning new applications and methods.

Work Experience:

Manufacturing Engineer Director
Thomson (Foshan) Display Inc, Jul. 2003 - Present

Duties
Administer manufacturing engineering standards on the production line through thorough knowledge of ISO-90001 & ISO-14000 standards, document production methods and process improvements.
Manage technicians
Quality control.
Arrange product testing.
Superintend operation personnel and machinery.
Oversee installation and alteration of equipment.
Purchase spare parts.
Achievements
Directed and managed a successful QPT project of “Exhaust improvement”.

Automatic Equipment Engineer
LED TECH Inc, Jun. 2002 - Jul. 2003

Duties
Recommend product changes through expert knowledge of the production process of the LED (light-emitting diode), Display and SMD; and facilitate equipment manufacturing.
Implement design changes and trouble shoot problems.
Effect disposition or rejection of material.
Provide assistance to all other departments.
Achievements
Promoted from PE engineer after 3 months.

Education:

Bachelor of mechanistic design and Automation, Zhengzhou Institute of Light Industry, 2002.
- Member of the Student Council

Additional Training and Skills:

Computer Abilities:
Skilled in Windows operating systems, SAP producing system, common office software, outlook Excel and CAD, also solidworks, mechanical design software.
English Skills:
Continually improving English skills - 6 months of professional training. Good command of written English. Completed CET-4.

References supplied upon request

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04-20-2006, 11:53 AM	#5
marichiko Guest Posts: n/a	As it just so happens, I am trying to drum up some work online writing resumes for people, so I gave yours a quick try. You need to have a clearly stated employment goal at the top of your resume. I don't know what job you are applying for, so I just put in "Engineering Director." You can fill in whatever the actual job title is that you are hoping to get. Generally, jobs are listed in reverse chronological order, and the use of the first person "I" is avoided. Its also important to list whatever achievements you accomplished at each of your jobs. I wasn't sure about your position(s) at your first place of employment, but it sounds as though they promoted you, so put that in. Usually salary is negotiated when the job offer is made, so don't put down a desired salary on your resume. Use "action" words like "implemented," "coordinated," "supervised." Let me know if you find this revision useful and good luck! ******************************* Objective: Engineering Director Summary: Three years’ experience with a Fortune 500 company. Aggressive, independent and able to work under pressure in a dynamic environment. Excellent teamwork and coordination skills. Proficient at learning new applications and methods. Work Experience: Manufacturing Engineer Director Thomson (Foshan) Display Inc, Jul. 2003 - Present Duties Administer manufacturing engineering standards on the production line through thorough knowledge of ISO-90001 & ISO-14000 standards, document production methods and process improvements. Manage technicians Quality control. Arrange product testing. Superintend operation personnel and machinery. Oversee installation and alteration of equipment. Purchase spare parts. Achievements Directed and managed a successful QPT project of “Exhaust improvement”. Automatic Equipment Engineer LED TECH Inc, Jun. 2002 - Jul. 2003 Duties Recommend product changes through expert knowledge of the production process of the LED (light-emitting diode), Display and SMD; and facilitate equipment manufacturing. Implement design changes and trouble shoot problems. Effect disposition or rejection of material. Provide assistance to all other departments. Achievements Promoted from PE engineer after 3 months. Education: Bachelor of mechanistic design and Automation, Zhengzhou Institute of Light Industry, 2002. - Member of the Student Council Additional Training and Skills: Computer Abilities: Skilled in Windows operating systems, SAP producing system, common office software, outlook Excel and CAD, also solidworks, mechanical design software. English Skills: Continually improving English skills - 6 months of professional training. Good command of written English. Completed CET-4. References supplied upon request ******************************* Last edited by marichiko; 04-20-2006 at 11:57 AM.