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Some are dark, most are simple, some are short, and some are off the wall.
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That describes all good poetry. Yours is very, very good.
I like them all, but "There She Goes" and especially "Cold and Broken" blow my skirt way up. 
PS- I think there's a mistake in the 10th line of "Cold and Broken".
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The descent of man ~ Nixon, Friedman, Reagan, Trump.
Last edited by xoxoxoBruce; 01-15-2006 at 01:28 PM.
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