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Originally Posted by dar512
This is a wedding we're talking about. Are you really confused?
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Yes.
As Crystal walked out of the glen and across a footbridge over Dempsey Creek, the flower girl sprinkled rose petals at her feet while country western singers played guitars and sang love songs. The subject of the sentence preceeding that statement is the flower girl, not Crystal. The reader shouldn't be left to resolve such quandries on his own. Its very awkward phrasing.
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Originally Posted by dar512
My guess is that this is your real issue. We'll have to agree to disagree on this one. I'm an old softy. It's well known that I get the sniffles at AT&T and Hallmark commercials.
And I'm a sucker for sentimental tripe.
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I can be a sucker for sentimental tripe, myself. I like
my sentimental tripe to be well written, however.
