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A poem for Claudette
I may alter this a little. But I've always posted my first drafts here, so I'll keep to my usual habit.
Claudette I remember years ago, The way we fought. Battle royal across the boards, man, we were vicious Knew how to needle each other, Get a rise from one another. I’m glad we turned that into caring. Letters on a message board flicker on my monitor screen. Faces unseen. It’s strange, I never saw you smile or laugh Except in photographs, That knowing half smile. The Mona Lisa secret smile I know I never held your hand, Was never the shoulder to your sadness, But still you were my friend and I will miss you Farewell my dear, You left us too soon. And I hope that you were right And I was wrong on what comes after ‘Cause you deserve laughter, And warmth and joy. And so I say, bon voyage my friend, Safe journey and goodbye. |
Thanks for sharing that Dana.
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Thank you, Dana.
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nice.
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Excellent.
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So beautiful, Dana.
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Thank you Dana.
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Very nice.
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That is beautiful dana. She would have loved that and would have offered you a posie. :flower:
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Ah damn, you're right, that is what she'd have done. Thanks m'dear.
Glad you guys like the poem. |
Touching. A fine tribute
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But in a good way. |
Lovely, thanks Dana.
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