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JBKlyde 03-27-2012 06:35 PM

If I fell in LOVE again..
 
If I fell in love again,
You'd fall from the heavens,
Right into my arms,
If I fell in love again,
This realm of pretend,
Would evolve into a garden,
A garden of everlasting life,
Where pain would cest to exist,
And our love would presist,
Like an endless sea of forgiveness,
Where everything flowed,
Like a meadow of flowers,
Reflecting the sun,
Day time would be continuous,
And night would never come,
The wind would blow like,
A mysterious myth,
And when we kissed,
Time would pass like,
The sounding of a clock,
We'd pray to God,
That it would never stop,
Weather or Not,
Our Love was true,
Would not be an issue,
It would just be me and you,
In Heaven doing what lovers do,
But Heaven seems so far away,
And I have no Idea what to say,
So when the night comes,
I'll just give it away,
The truth is that pretending,
Just isn't a good way.

DanaC 03-28-2012 03:45 AM

Oh I really like this!

Seriously impressed.

wolf 03-28-2012 11:42 AM

I also. I'm not a big poetry fancier, but that paints a picture.

DanaC 03-28-2012 12:24 PM

There are some lovely lines there.

Quote:

Like an endless sea of forgiveness,
Where everything flowed,
Like a meadow of flowers,
Reflecting the sun,
Day time would be continuous,
And night would never come,
The wind would blow like,
A mysterious myth,
And when we kissed,
Time would pass like,
The sounding of a clock,
That is just gorgeous.

JBKlyde 03-28-2012 12:47 PM

Thank You Thank You.. I'm trying to get my grove back... I'm not very good at writing love poetry. I ship wrecked my self with some of the stuff I wrote when I was younger.. but hey it's never 2 late 2 turn around///

JBKlyde 03-29-2012 06:50 PM

Quote:

Day time would be continuous,
And night would never come,
Do you think that is unamerican seeings how we have all those stars on the flag or am I Describeing Africa??

JBKlyde 04-08-2012 03:32 PM

Quote:

This realm of pretend,
Would evolve into a garden,
and that line seems a little unchristian seeings how christian's don't believe in evolution

qcc?

BigV 04-09-2012 11:07 AM

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Originally Posted by JBKlyde (Post 805661)
and that line seems a little unchristian seeings how christian's don't believe in evolution

qcc?

Certainly there are some people who don't believe in evolution. And some of those people are christians. But JBK, I assure you, that there are plenty of christians that do believe in evolution. Disbelief in evolution is *not* a requirement to be a christian.


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