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Juniper 09-30-2008 11:31 PM

Poems in Honor of October
 
Just Dress Up One More Year

I don’t know how I feel about it.
Halloween is easier when children are small,
When all they care about is candy
And playing dress up.
Grinning pumpkins – think of the way they smell
As the candle scorches their skin!
Somewhere a bonfire burns.
The street’s lit up
Like a big block party
That goes on for miles.
Please, just one more house!
Mom, would you carry this for me?
Mom, would you carry me?

It’s easier then.
When children are young
We’re young too –
What do we know of death?
But age plays tricks.
Somewhere there’s a plaque
Or a stone with a too-familiar name.
Maybe more than one.
When the chill wind blows
And the dry tree limbs creak
The ghosts are all too real.
The skulls aren’t plastic
But frames that once held flesh you kissed.

We smile anyway.
We put on clown makeup, or sew ears and a tail
And try to keep our little ghouls
Unbloodied and sweet
Just one more year.

ZenGum 10-01-2008 12:08 AM

Excellent.


Really really excellent.



(Except "chill wind blows" ... sounds kind of familiar, sort of thing that is said a bit too often. No suggestions though).

Sundae 10-01-2008 04:08 AM

October in the Office

All afternoon
The trees have been burning
In a bright blue sky,
And I have been sitting here
Imprisoned
Behind wired windows.

The strip lighting hums
Soporifically.
And I have been thinking
About sex
All afternoon.

DanaC 10-01-2008 04:25 AM

I loved both of those poems.

Juniper, that was stunning. I really like the way the mood drops in the second stanza. The first stanza is full of activity and agency, the second is more passive and full of imposed reflection. Lovely.
Also the progression from reflections on children to reflections on people lost, echoes the progression from spring/summer to autumn/winter.

Sundae, that poem really got under my skin. I loved the payoff. It's very human and real.

Trilby 10-01-2008 08:49 AM

Dark Things

I like the dark things, Halloween things,
Gleeful grins and voodoo queens;
Tarot decks and green moonbeams.

I like the pansy, fearful face and back,
Growling up at me from the bushpack
Poison mushroom-caps, magick brick-a-brack.

I like the room beneath the Tree
Cauldrons and witches, three by three-
I like the unseen, silly world
That just might bite a careless girl.

Pie 10-01-2008 08:59 AM

The grateful winds
That carried my father's ashes
Have left behind the bones.
The playthings of ants, next season's
Building birds, know nothing of the man.

Cicero 10-01-2008 09:38 AM

Dios de los Muertos
(Days of the Dead)

The dead dance lightly for the living.
The living dance slowly for the dead.

Dry October leaves blow away singularly.
Like the years spent with a loved one;
leaving sight, then forgotten.

The dead dance lightly for the living.
The living dance slowly for the dead.

The dead remove their masks 3 days a year.
In remberance, the living don theirs;
unknowingly meeting in genuine form.

The dead dance lightly for the living.
The living dance slowly for the dead.

The dead celebrate the living who have continued.
The living with weary eyes;
store the old away until even the resonant sounds of the dead have passed on.

The dead dance lightly for the living.
The living dance slowly for the dead.

The dead are living and the living are dead.
So let us dance lightly and slowly for everyone;
until we know we are together again.

(yes it needs a lot of work) ;)

skysidhe 10-01-2008 04:16 PM

"A child looking at ruins grows younger
but cold
and wants to wake to a new name
I have been younger in October
than in all the months of spring
walnut and may leaves the color
of shoulders at the end of summer
a month that has been to the mountain
and become light there
the long grass lies pointing uphill
even in death for a reason
that none of us knows
and the wren laughs in the early shade now
come again shining glance in your good time
naked air late morning
my love is for lightness
of touch foot feather
the day is yet one more yellow leaf
and without turning I kiss the light
by an old well on the last of the month
gathering wild rose hips
in the sun."
- W. S. Merwin,
The Love of October

Clodfobble 10-01-2008 04:32 PM

Look, a haiku!


October Schmockto-
Ber. Let me know when I can
Wear a jacket.

monster 10-01-2008 07:11 PM

:lol:

ZenGum 10-01-2008 07:25 PM

'course, down under, it's the other way around:

Spring is springing springishly
Trees are leafing greenishly
insects spawn fish-feedingly
overgrown, undermown
Spring is springing springishly.

monster 10-01-2008 08:09 PM

Four arms and four legs
All hairy and brown
And gruesomely clawed
are holding me down
What is this monster?
I'm trapped in it's lair
Is it the Sasquatch?
No, it's Octo-bear!

monster 10-01-2008 08:10 PM

Initially eight, elevated to ten
Not appreciation, but vanity of men.

ZenGum 10-02-2008 03:01 AM

Good one, Monster!

Sundae 10-02-2008 05:22 AM

Ah Pie, yours made the hairs stand up on my arms.
I try not to think about being in your position, but you carry it with grace.

Loved your couplet Monster, clever.
(in fact I have loved all the poems on here and feel guilty for not mentioning each one)

October Haiku
Blue sky in puddle,
The wind blows a leaf across.
It's Autumn again.

skysidhe 10-02-2008 10:04 AM

"Lady Autumn, Queen of the Harvest,
I have seen You in the setting Sun
with Your long auburn tresses
blowing in the cool air that surrounds You.
Your crown of golden leaves is jeweled
with amber, amethyst, and rubies.
Your long, flowing purple robe stretches across the horizon.
In Your hands You hold the ripened fruits.
At Your feet the squirrels gather acorns.
Black crows perch on Your outstretched arms.
All around You the leaves are falling.
You sit upon Your throne and watch
the dying fires of the setting Sun
shine forth its final colors in the sky.
The purple and orange lingers
and glows like burning embers.
Then all colors fade into the twilight.
Lady Autumn, You are here at last.
We thank You for Your rewards.
We have worked hard for these gifts.
Lady Autumn, now grant us peace and rest."
- Deirdre Akins

Shawnee123 10-02-2008 11:38 AM

Lyrics:

Forever Autumn
Justin Hayward


The summer sun is fading as the year grows old
And darker days are drawing near...
The winter winds will be much colder
Now you're not here.
I watch the birds fly south across the autumn sky
And one by one they disappear.
I wish that I was flying with them
Now you're not here

Like a song through the trees you came to love me
Like a leaf on a breeze you blew away...

Through autumn's golden gown we used to kick our way
You always loved this time of year.
Those fallen leaves lie undisturbed now
'Cause you're not here

Like a song throught the trees you came to love me
Like a leaf on a breeze you blew away...

A gentle rain falls softly on my weary eyes
As if to hide a lonely tear...
My life will be forever autumn
'Cause you're not here.

Sundae 10-02-2008 12:27 PM

Oh I do love me a bit of War Of The Worlds!

Shawnee123 10-02-2008 12:29 PM

Heeehee, is that what that's from? I remember hearing it on the radio when I was young and I bought the '45 (for those who remember what a 45 is!) I just thought it was an eerily pretty song...was it the theme song or something? :blush:

Sundae 10-02-2008 12:43 PM

I started typing up what I know, but then realised I had so much to check, I might as well refer you directly to Wiki.

I grew up with the album, and I have to say the pictures in it, and the noise of the Martians (and of course the scary story) made a huge impression on me. In fact it was a relief to read H G Wells' well-ordered and dated book. One of the few times the source material has had less impact on me than the adaptation!

We all sat and watched the live version on TV last Christmas. A recording of it sung and played live that is (at the O2), not an action version. It was mesmerising. I did miss David Essex as the Artilleryman though. And Julie Covington (also my ideal Mary Magdalene) singing, "No Nathaniel, oh no Nathanial no" - she has such an ethereal voice.

Shawnee123 10-02-2008 01:35 PM

I had no idea. It was just a song I liked when I was younger. Pretty interesting, though! :)

ps I miscredited, looks like it was written by Jeff Wayne, Gary Osborne and Paul Vigrass????

Juniper 10-02-2008 01:38 PM

Wonderful poetry, everyone! Thanks for sharing, and thanks for the compliments on mine! I've not been much of a poet in the past, but now that I'm a little more comfy with reading it, I'm finding it fun to write.

Pie 10-02-2008 02:16 PM

The days are coming, I can see them quite clearly
But they contain only the silence of cacophony
& meaningless sincerity

I have become a sounding brass
With no notes, no music, no reason to play
No ear to please

The fall's figs are ripe,
Who will harvest them?

I find I no longer care for the taste
Of living -

DanaC 10-02-2008 06:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sundae Girl (Post 489107)
And Julie Covington (also my ideal Mary Magdalene) singing, "No Nathaniel, oh no Nathanial no" - she has such an ethereal voice.

Even reading that line sends a shiver down my spine. There's just something about that "No Nathaniel" catches at my throat.

@Juniper. You do surprise me. The poem has quite a confident feel to it.

ZenGum 10-03-2008 04:38 AM

Ah October!
Your so fine you blow my mind
You blow my mind, October!



Sorry.

TheMercenary 10-03-2008 04:41 PM

Some good ones.

http://www.geocities.com/siliconvall.../2856/jack.htm


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