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squirell nutkin 06-17-2010 02:18 PM

But seriously, you can change the order of the words to make it sound better:
The affidavits were the only evidence

Cloud 06-17-2010 02:19 PM

Yeah, I think so. when in doubt, re-word!

glatt 06-17-2010 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by squirell nutkin (Post 663923)
But seriously, you can change the order of the words to make it sound better:
The affidavits were the only evidence

That's true when you take the sentence out of context. Having not read the document I don't know if the context is important here, but perhaps the writer wants to emphasize the word "evidence" and not "affidavits."

Cloud 06-17-2010 02:42 PM

that's also a valid point

Nirvana 06-17-2010 03:28 PM

"The only evidence were the affidavits."

"The only thing in evidence were the affidavits."

jinx 06-17-2010 03:38 PM

Ooh, good point Vana.

Cloud 06-17-2010 03:40 PM

hmm; don't see any difference, or clarification in that. It won't work in context anyway, for our purposes.

HungLikeJesus 06-17-2010 10:17 PM

I disagree with all of you - it should be is.

Sundae 06-18-2010 07:07 AM

I remember the first time I was taught that "The group was shown round the castle" was correct. It sounded SO wrong to me.
Same with learning that "you and I" was not always correct, or that "too" can mean excessive as well as also and the letter H is properly pronounced "aitch".

It's all second nature now, but it's funny to remember how outraged I was at the time.

Interesting post and answers btw.

Shawnee123 06-18-2010 08:20 AM

My brother asked me about the 'you and I/you and me' thing. I told him whatever works alone is what you use.

You and I went to the movies. (I went to the movies.)

It doesn't matter to you and me. (It doesn't matter to me.)


I hear it misused by some fairly intelligent folks.

Pico and ME 06-18-2010 09:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cloud (Post 663842)
you think "evidence' is plural?

The phrase, 'the only evidence' is not the subject of the sentence, it is a subject complement and is describing affidavits. It is actually a predicate adjective.

classicman 06-18-2010 09:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pico and ME (Post 664120)
The phrase, 'the only evidence' is not the subject of the sentence, it is a subject complement and is describing affidavits. It is actually a predicate adjective.

:blownup:

squirell nutkin 06-18-2010 10:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nirvana (Post 663937)
"The only evidence were the affidavits."

"The only thing in evidence were the affidavits."

"The only things in evidence were the affidavits." Don't plurals have to agree?

And in other news...
Pico just got 900 hotness points for being a parsing ninja

Nirvana 06-18-2010 02:29 PM

I changed it once and changed it back. I was going for a modifier using evidence as an adjective:)


>pitches college English course grades. . .

squirell nutkin 06-18-2010 10:15 PM

You sly devil!


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