I actually rather liked the story. I liked the style of writing. I wasn't entirely sure about the ending, seemed to lack a certain something, but overall I thought it worked.

There was a link to the rest of the story in the first post, if anyone was interested. There is also 14 other web sites it's on.

I must have been different 2 years ago. I don't even understand my own response from 2005.

And I didn't say you were.