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Trilby 04-13-2008 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cicero (Post 445577)
Ha...no one nominated the slam poet. plbbt.

whozzat? Flint?

HungLikeJesus 04-13-2008 07:41 PM

I'll nominate (or second?) DanaC, for Manchester Dreaming.

Sun_Sparkz had some pretty good poetry, but I don't think she's posted anything lately.

Trilby 04-13-2008 08:07 PM

I'm out.


couldn't last a night.

HungLikeJesus 04-13-2008 08:15 PM

Brianna, look ... 7,000 posts.

You can't back out. You're a great poetess.

lumberjim 04-13-2008 08:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brianna (Post 445630)
I'm out.


couldn't last a night.

what the fuck is that supposed to mean?

if you're out, I'll toss the whole thing. and give the award to aliantha.

HungLikeJesus 04-13-2008 08:49 PM

I don't think it should be a nomination thread but a participation thread.

Trilby 04-13-2008 08:51 PM

I write only for fun. It's nothing, none of it. I write for 2nd graders, which is fine and fun, but it's no great art. It's only to get them to think. I have a prof that I actually LOATHE; he's a published, accomplished poet and I hate everything he's written. He was there when SS boots threatened his family but yet....he still makes the poem motherfucking boring. His poems suck. a lot.

we were going over a really sexy stanza in a poem (Cherrylog Road) where the guy, who wants to score with the girl, says:

I held her and held her and held her,
Convoyed at terrific speed
By the stalled, dreaming traffic around us,
So the blacksnake, stiff
With inaction, curved back
Into life, and hunted the mouse

And Professor,in his sixties, well aquainted with sex, refused to discuss this stanza as he was "afraid' mothers, fathers, and faculity would find it "offensive." what-a-douche.

he shouldn't be teaching poetry let alone write it.

end rant.

HungLikeJesus 04-13-2008 10:47 PM

Yeah, I really like Cherrylog Road. But I always thought it was about racing cars on back roads.

lumberjim 04-14-2008 11:54 AM

nevermind this nonsense. wouldnt have been that much fun anyway

Trilby 04-14-2008 11:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lumberjim (Post 445804)
nevermind this nonsense. wouldnt have been that much fun anyway

Lj, I have an unimaginable fear of rejection. I can only write stuff if it doesn't matter. that's my big secret (that everyone knows, anyway). I think it WOULD be fun but I can't compete with others. I have a very fragile sense of self as it is!! I do poems for fun--coz they make me smile or laugh, not because I can 'write' them. I didn't mean to piss on your parade. that's two for me with you---just ignore me. I'll get better.

lumberjim 04-14-2008 02:14 PM

meh.....
competetive poetry is probably a bad concept.

Trilby 04-14-2008 03:46 PM

competitive poetry is NOT a bad idea. it's what keeps poetry alive.

I think we need rules:

a poet must make use of the according: cunnilingus, french kissing, rimjob.

make THAT into a poem, you godless amatuers, and then we will talk!! :)

lumberjim 04-14-2008 03:52 PM

the omission of 'felatio' from that list is quietly shrieking in my mind's ear.

monster 04-14-2008 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brianna (Post 445864)
a poet must make use of the according: cunnilingus, french kissing, rimjob.

Mmmph slup urmph fmumph phlamf phlamf plamf slup
aaaahhhh
slurplr slup slup slurple
ew, you have a pube in your teeth
Oh, OH :eek: oooh uh uh uh uh.........

Giant Salamander 04-14-2008 10:35 PM

Though you have no eyes
And your face is a slit,
You do have thighs
And epic pink lips

We'll lay here for days,
My tongue planted deep
In the swamp-like haze
That swells as you weep

When juices run out,
Your caverns well fed,
I'll move to the mouth
On the back of your head


:)

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